Working+Thesis

Americans are increasingly apathetic and unaware of domestic and foreign politics; the reason for this: they are becoming more wrapped up in their own pop culture.

Americans, due to absorption in their own pop culture and apathy towards topics they aren't forced to learn in school, are becoming increasingly unaware of domestic and foreign politics and issues.

If you are beginning to lean more towards education as a cause of apathy, then that should be addressed directly in your thesis. Are you going to argue that the narrowing down of curriculum in public schools leads to the fact that Americans tend to be unaware of domestic and foreign politics and issues?

Americans, due to absorption in their own pop culture, a narrowing of public school curriculum, and an apathy towards topics that they aren't forced to lean in school, are becoming increasingly unaware of domestic and foreign politics and issues.